17A Elevator Pitch pt 2

https://youtu.be/bKbqI_Wjxz8

2)  I liked that people actually enjoyed my product and that they thought I delivered a good  pitch because I wasn't very confident in it. I did get criticized on my use of "Um" and I tried to be better this time but I really need to work on this in my everyday life lol

3) I tried to enunciate my words better and I actually did my hair this time since I looked so rugged last time and someone actually commented on that thanks whoever you are.